The writing process for essay 3 has definitely been the most difficult for me in this class, however I feel I will gain more confidence after some office hours. #RHUB200
@BiancaAugusto23 One thing that you should keep in mind is the other costs that the athletic programs uses that revenue for (gear, maintaining facilities, etc.) Another thing that you may want to consider is if the amount given to students in scholarships already enough to support them. #RHUB200
@bfrancey_ One thing that you may want to consider is making sure you discuss how this relates to minimum wage per state. Each state is different and it's hard to judge what people in each state will need. Federal Wage rate is hard to create for 50 different states. #RHUB200
McCarthy supports this by describing the consequences of McCain's actions, like families being torn apart. This makes the reader evaluate their opinion on McCain's actions. This makes us reevaluate the assumption that the term "war-hero" is a postive one. #RHUB200
A claim that McCarthy makes is that McCain should not praised for being a "war-hero". McCarthy elaborates by saying that being a war-hero would have you do morally wrong things, in McCain's case, dropping bombs in Vietnam. #RHUB200
@MadysonJWalker While I believe in the emphasis on empath and respect, there are some people who will take advantage of that or may ignore you completely. #RHUB200
@luis_riiooss I agree that the criminal justice system can be heavily affected by emotions, especially when it comes to the jury. Just remember that during jury selection lawyers try to remove anyone with a bias that may stem from emotions. #RHUB200
Willer's analogy of "think what movie are we in" is a way to think what an audience you are writing to may be thinking. If you more understand what your audience believes what "movie they are in" you can write into their values better and create a stronger argument. #RHUB200
The process for writing this bibliography so far has been pretty shaky. I'm gather as much as I can from the examples provided, but I'm not to sure I am doing it correctly. I am mainly concerned about my paragraph descriptions and if I am citing my sources correctly #RHUB200
@summmerra A potential complication that you may have is where does one paint the line for diseases that are eligible for assisted suicide? You mention terminal patients, but what about patients that are in a constant state of pain, but not terminally ill? #RHUB200
@xmivhelle I am doing something similar to your topic. What sparked my interest in researching education was this video. It deals with standardized testing, you may find that it supports you in your argument.
https://t.co/myHoRvRX8b
Argument: The basis in which students are judged on for their college admissions are clouded. We are judged in fields that are not indicative of the skills needed in college. What colleges look for during the admission process must change to seek a broader set of skills. #RHUB200
For essay 3, I will be looking at how College Admission has changed through the years. I find this compelling as it is something that I had recently been a part of, but did not have much knowledge of what was going on behind the scenes... #RHUB200