Bianca Augusto

RWS 200

[Bianca Augusto @BiancaAugusto23]

The writing process for essay 3 has definitely taken up the most time. There is a lot of different components that go into this essay. I feel like going through all of the sources and picking the right evidence from them takes the most time. #RHUB200

[Bianca Augusto @BiancaAugusto23]

@CameronHRWS200 I think this would be a really effective image to use in your paper because it shows how even the leader of our country is putting out these statements. What paragraph are you unthinking of including this in? #RHUB200

[Bianca Augusto @BiancaAugusto23]

@meganfabiola01 I think this visual does a great job at showing how much effort behind the scenes goes into clothing. What is the overall point you are trying to make by using this visual? #RHUB200

[Bianca Augusto @BiancaAugusto23]

@marienashh Thank you for your input! I am not exactly sure what paragraph this will be included in yet. Although the point that I am trying to make is that there is a huge gap between the money that colleges bring in compared to the amount of money spent on scholarships #RHUB200

[Bianca Augusto @BiancaAugusto23]

This is a visual that I am considering if using for essay 3. It helps put into perspective the wide gap between how much revenue that athletic programs receive and the amount of money that is spent on scholarships for students. #RHUB200

[Bianca Augusto @BiancaAugusto23]

@rusllmrtnz4RWS Thank you! Yes I have looked into it and multiple sources have stated that the scholarships come short about $2000. Also not every student is given a scholarship only a selected few. #RHUB200

[Bianca Augusto @BiancaAugusto23]

@PatrickDoyle100 #RWS200

[Bianca Augusto @BiancaAugusto23]

@PatrickDoyle100 Exactly. A good take away from your tweet is that the writer should always have a good understanding of who their target audience is in order to connect with them. If this connection is not made you might talk right past them or they won’t be able to receive the message as well

[Bianca Augusto @BiancaAugusto23]

@xmivhelle Yes I agree. An important point you made that I think everyone could take away from is to address the counter argument. This shows that you recognize there is another side present. If people feel like this weekend their initial argument they could always refute it #RWS200

[Bianca Augusto @BiancaAugusto23]

A specific idea Robb Willer made that I agree with is that the political divide that we are witnessing, is funneled to a moral divide. Most people, especially in politics, are so tethered to their personal values that they cannot view it from other perspectives #RWS200

[Bianca Augusto @BiancaAugusto23]

@GinaLatimer2 I was feeling the same way at one point as well. The issue for me was I felt like the sources I was finding got repetitive at one point. Also to my surprise finding credible sources that went against my argument has been difficult. Good luck! #RHUB200

[Bianca Augusto @BiancaAugusto23]

@marienashh #RHUB200

[Bianca Augusto @BiancaAugusto23]

@marienashh I am feeling the same exact way. This prompt is definitely longer than any other one that I have had before. It at times gets overwhelming because I want to make sure I am not leaving anything out! Good luck I hope it gets easier!

[Bianca Augusto @BiancaAugusto23]

Compared to the other essays this one is definitely more challenging. There are so many different aspects to the annotated bibliography as well as the essay. I just want to make sure that I am hitting all of the points that I need to. #RHUB200

[Bianca Augusto @BiancaAugusto23]

@pierre_donte https://t.co/KiAw0aUMtU this is an article that shows the benefits of marijuana from a medical standpoint

[Bianca Augusto @BiancaAugusto23]

@sydneygniesen https://t.co/gq5rAzfkZg this is an article that explains the fashion industries contribution to climate change

[Bianca Augusto @BiancaAugusto23]

Argument: College athletes should be paid because they bring in millions of dollars for universities and never see a penny of it. Only 1% of college athletes make it to the professional level so college is their opportunity to profit off of their athletic abilities. #RHUB200

[Bianca Augusto @BiancaAugusto23]

@meganfabiola01 I think this is an exciting topic that is not discussed as much as it should be. It will be interesting to see what solutions are to this issue. #RHUB200

[Bianca Augusto @BiancaAugusto23]

@xmivhelle I agree with your argument. I think there needs to be a new way to gain an overall understanding of people that shows everything they have to offer. I am interested to see what you find. #RHUB200

[Bianca Augusto @BiancaAugusto23]

https://t.co/OkQxyrVnI6
The topic I have chosen is college athletes should be paid. The source I chose explains how universities are making millions of dollars from athletes yet they never see any of it regardless of the tireless efforts they put into their sport. #RHUB200