Andre Andrada

[Andre Andrada @aandrada1]

@Rarexterior @ryankiernan15 I liked the variety of the picture selection on your website. #lyra101

[Andre Andrada @aandrada1]

I will try to pick a better theme and incorporate my Rogerian and Stasis Grid in a similar fashion to @mcjennings18 #lyra101

[Andre Andrada @aandrada1]

@Rarexterior @ryankiernan15 @WalterBoger Thank you for giving me the suggestion to make my website less informative. #lyra101

[Andre Andrada @aandrada1]

I am still slightly unsure about the Stakeholder forum #lyra101

[Andre Andrada @aandrada1]

While revising my CAP, I will need to make the paragraphs more concise and reader-friendly #lyra101

[Andre Andrada @aandrada1]

Lisa Jaster(Completely in support)
Jude Eden(Completely against)
Robert Cone(Supports integration, but cautious)
#lyra101

[Andre Andrada @aandrada1]

This shows repetition because of how each section is bold and underlined. It's also center-aligned #lyra101 https://t.co/vNZbkPPBap

[Andre Andrada @aandrada1]

This shows contrast because of the dark letters on the white background, and the bold, important details #lyra101 https://t.co/ctD0NHCYYB

[Andre Andrada @aandrada1]

One editing strategy that I like to use is reading the paper out loud #lyra101

[Andre Andrada @aandrada1]

One of the most helpful "lucky" strategies for revision is writing a plan of action #lyra101

[Andre Andrada @aandrada1]

@effi_feldblum thank you for your feedback. I found it very valuable because it gave me different ideas to talk about @lyra101

[Andre Andrada @aandrada1]

@AndreiJungkman Your feedback was really helpful in class on Tuesday. It gave me another way of looking at my topic @lyra101

[Andre Andrada @aandrada1]

Three unnecessary modifiers are very, greatly, and many @lyra101

[Andre Andrada @aandrada1]

There are many foods that I like such as burgers, pizza, and pie. #lyra101

[Andre Andrada @aandrada1]

Background info: define combat unit and integrated combat unit, controversy on the topic, why integration hasn't been done earlier #lyra101

[Andre Andrada @aandrada1]

Thesis: Integrated combat units in the field will be able to work well and accomplish missions successfully. #lyra101

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Cone is from Military Medicine @lyra101

[Andre Andrada @aandrada1]

Nindl et al. is from Military Medicine @lyra101

[Andre Andrada @aandrada1]

Nindl et al. are responsible for their arguments and to other writers throughout their article by constantly citing their data @lyra101

[Andre Andrada @aandrada1]

@WarOnTheRocks @NRO @popularmilitary We believe there needs to be careful consideration regarding integrating women into combat @lyra101