For your personal brand, you want slow and steady growth vs sudden massive growth.
It takes time to build the kind of trust and loyalty that ultimately turns into $$$.
You can tell when someone doesn't know what they're talking about when they don't use specifics.
Get your reps in so you can speak from experience.
People can tell the difference.
Quick hack to write better:
Use dictation.
This makes you realize that writing isn't different from speaking.
Right away you'll sound so much more natural.