Great stories make the world go round. Creative director / Revenue Engineers Amsterdam / Narrator / Part-time Blogger / Working on that / Wannabe writer
Most homepages force customers to do homework:
"We are [brand]"
"We deliver cutting-edge solutions"
We're all consumed with 'me', but so many brands still speak from 'we'. Open your homepage and ask: do we make people work to figure out what we do for them?
Two daily writing habits that kill writer's block:
1. Prep the page. Lay down the outline beforehand so you're not staring at blank page; you just fill in the blanks.
2. Lock in your slot. Block the time, sit down, and write. Something will materialise. It always does.
The million dollar question your brand should answer: what's our "when"?
When you zoom in on the exact moment your customer struggles, it's like reading their mind. Like Nike, cheering you on under the lamp post at 6 AM, when it's dark, cold and wet and you're going for a run.
The most effective habit from Ship 30 for 30: writing 1 long-form piece every week.
> It forces you to take a deep dive.
>> 1 Long-form breaks into multiple segments.
>>> Each segment is a standalone nugget to distribute.
One big idea is the gift that keeps on giving.
If your B2B homepage isn't converting, it's rarely a traffic problem.
99 out of 100 it's a headline that is:
• Too vague
• All about "we"
• Just plain boring
Fix the headline, and you'll stop leaking leads in those first 5 seconds.
Most brand copy is forgettable. Make it undeniable: swap persuasion for articulation.
"Persuasive" copy feels like a pitch. It puts peoples' guard up. When you articulate your brand's conviction, you aren't trying to convince anyone—you're telling a truth they already feel.
We hope our best ideas hit us in the shower, but the reality is:
→ Thinking leads to ideas
→ Ideas lead to thinking
→ And round and round you go
The quickest way to kickstart your thinking? Start writing.
After 26 years in creative strategy, the most valuable question for founders remains:
'What's the core conviction that started your brand?'
If the answer doesn't 100% define your positioning and copywriting, you're trawling the sea as a sailboat when you could be a tall ship.
Sometimes, all you need is two words to capture a thousand.
While working at Lotus Cars, to greet new owners I simply settled for:
'WELCOME, DRIVER'
1. Speak to your audience
2. Capture your brand
3. Cut the fluff
Check all 3 and you hit the 'holy trinity' of brand copy.
If you know your brand copy needs 'more' but don't know where to start, open your homepage and read the headline.
It's the first thing your customer sees. Now ask yourself: 'Do they recognise themselves in the first 5 seconds?'. If they don't, they're gone.