bennett mcgowan

GSU Class of 2025. Studying Criminal Justice and Criminology.

[bennett mcgowan @bennettmcg1101]

is the reflection a separate word doc thats submitted with our website link or is it a page in the website? @MargotMauk1101

[bennett mcgowan @bennettmcg1101]

#ReflectOn1101 the most surprising pieces of feedback I received were the little things like grammar and organization tips that went a long way and most likely ended up boosting my grade. It was the things that I wouldn't of thought to look at.

[bennett mcgowan @bennettmcg1101]

#ReflectOn1101 In the future, I hope to accomplish a more in depth writing skill. I want to be able to analyze the meaning and not write so much of a summary. Communication can help me because I can ask for guidance and tips

[bennett mcgowan @bennettmcg1101]

#ReflectOn1101 I am most proud of my organization and time management this semester. I was able to keep myself on track, giving myself plenty of time to complete work and turn everything on time.

[bennett mcgowan @bennettmcg1101]

#ReflectOn1101 My most challenging moments would probably have been finding 10 sources that were strong and also my works cited page and making sure it was correct. The works cited page was iffy and still is because i'm still not sure its correct

[bennett mcgowan @bennettmcg1101]

#ReflectOn1101 My writing process when the semester began was to have a simple outline and turn that into a paper. Now, my writing process is now to brainstorm, make an outline, and also make a checklist of all of the requirements to be able to mark off as I go

[bennett mcgowan @bennettmcg1101]

shoutout to @mckenzie1101 you project 1 was very good and you showed growth and improvement throughout. you took corrections and applied them very well to make a great essay. You also gave me great corrections that I was able to apply. #Week16ShoutOuts

[bennett mcgowan @bennettmcg1101]

shoutout to @NicklausStewar2 your website was one of the best that I saw. it had a great color scheme and was well organized and thought out. the pictures represented the example perfectly. #Week16ShoutOuts

[bennett mcgowan @bennettmcg1101]

shoutout to @AllieM1101 your project 1 drafts were very good and didn't need much editing, your writing was strong and organized throughout. #Week16ShoutOuts

[bennett mcgowan @bennettmcg1101]

shoutout to @luckyfin03 she had great corrections and tips for my website this past peer edit. I was able to edit the things she pointed out for a stronger website. #Week16ShoutOuts

[bennett mcgowan @bennettmcg1101]

@ShumanZoee You have done great this semester! Your peer edits are very thorough and helpful when editing. #Week16ShoutOuts

[bennett mcgowan @bennettmcg1101]

@Erin_whalenn the schedule says December 1

[bennett mcgowan @bennettmcg1101]

I am going to work on getting into a deeper analysis and my work cited page today #Project2Workshop

[bennett mcgowan @bennettmcg1101]

#project2wrapup I’m struggling with my works cited page because some of my sources don’t have authors and publication dates

[bennett mcgowan @bennettmcg1101]

Revised Thesis: The use of tight bonds and heart felt conversations between the fathers guides them into the heroic standpoint that is needed to prove the point that dads can be responsible without mom present.

[bennett mcgowan @bennettmcg1101]

Daddy Daycare uses tight bonds and heart felt conversations to guide the fathers into a heroic standpoint. #ThesisReboot1101

[bennett mcgowan @bennettmcg1101]

SS: Daddy Daycare
Opinion: uses tight bonds and heart felt conversations
S: to guide the fathers into a heroic standpoint

[bennett mcgowan @bennettmcg1101]

do we need to put the hyperlinks for the images in the work cited pages as well as in the examples? #QuestionTheCitation1101

[bennett mcgowan @bennettmcg1101]

when creating the works cited page, how do i know whether to put it in quotations or italics? @MargotMauk1101

[bennett mcgowan @bennettmcg1101]

https://t.co/OeHzacA21N

[bennett mcgowan @bennettmcg1101]

I think I am going to analyze my composition about Daddy Daycare because I feel it shows my archetype from a different point of view than the other compositions do #AnalyzeThis1101

[bennett mcgowan @bennettmcg1101]

I am defining success for this composition because it shows two fathers coming together and working together to accomplish something bigger than they could do by themselves