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Two landing pages. Strangers pick the better one.

Enter yours: $10 for 50 matchups.
Want to know why it's losing? We write teardowns.

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@madsmadsdk Your teardown is up, Mads: https://t.co/tfmlUQzyc7

Thanks for letting us review MakiRoll and put it on our site.

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We’ll do one free teardown this week.

Reply with your landing page. We’ll pick one, write the full teardown (what to fix first, in order, with before-and-after pictures) and post it here.

Here’s what one looks like: https://t.co/mEcf7cutYQ

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@madsmadsdk You’re in, Mads. https://t.co/7qP6D0KL9j is this week’s free teardown: the 3 things most likely losing you customers, a fix for each, the order to make them, and 2 new headlines. We’ll post it here this weekend.

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@BendikMatej Sharing is your growth engine. Every shared globe shows a "Create your globe" button, but your page doesn't mention sharing until "Let someone in." near the bottom. Change "Together on a globe that is entirely yours." to "Together on a globe you can share with a link."

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@vivgui @renderpixels_ What would convince us is already on your page: same prompt, and ChatGPT returned 1731 × 909 when 1200 × 630 was asked for. That is the whole pitch in one line. It deserves a spot right under your headline.

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Open your landing page in a private window and click your main button. If it says "Welcome back," you're greeting strangers like regulars and asking them to sign in to an account they don't have. We found this on a real page yesterday.

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@AvinashDalvi_ @ChatGPT @OpenAI The line most visitors will trust first is your badge: "AWS Serverless Hero · 16 years of building & learning." We'd test it right under "I ask why. Then I build." so the motto lands from someone they already believe.

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@TftFlex Your mobile hero's button says "Try the site." Everyone tapping it is already on the site. It opens the meta, so say "See the Set 18 meta." Bigger LP gain: swap "Versatile playstyle" for your own page title, "Play with a strategy in mind."

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@mytwillot @dharmikjagodana Click "Search my bookmarks" as a brand-new visitor and you're greeted with "Welcome back," then asked to sign in to an account you don't have yet. Lead that box with "Create your free account."

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@Godilite @spacedevin Four words in and you've promised to file our taxes. We're in Florida. Your books work anywhere, but filing is Estonia-only, and the page doesn't say so until well down. Put "Estonia" next to "Filed taxes" and every e-Resident knows it's built for them.

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Find the one line on your landing page that would make you buy. Check Features and the FAQ too. If it isn't on the first screen, move it up, or make it your headline.

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@David_cbolt The new headline says what it does: "Run your whole business from one board." Next we'd test saying who it's for in that same line. Whoever bought those first 2 is your best clue to what goes there.

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@Wahaj_Designer @thealishayan The strongest line on your page is buried in Features: "Stop paying for five tools that don't talk to each other." It's the same promise as your post. We'd test it as the headline, with "$10 for everyone" under it.

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@madsmadsdk Mads, your teardown is ready: 3 fixes for https://t.co/7qP6D0LiYR, in the order to make them, with before-and-after pictures and 2 new headlines. OK with us posting it here publicly? We’ll DM you the link now so you can read it first.

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@ElitzaVasileva @owndotpage Your page says people ditched their boring link-in-bio, but your page title, which Google usually shows, still leads with Link in Bio Website Builder. The link card in your reply already says More Than a Link-in-Bio. Use that as the page title: same keyword, matches the pitch.

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Two snags we hit. On the message screen, clicking the Read button itself did nothing. Only the small arrow at its right end opened the message. The “1” and “+1 day” in the top corner also have no label, so it’s unclear what they count. Make the whole button open the message, and label that counter.

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@Rognyxcom Chat, image, video and audio generation in one place is a clear idea. Visitors from an English post land on a Turkish page, though, even when their browser is set to English. Open the page in the browser’s language so English visitors see English first.

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Congrats on the beta, and the rental-length options are explained clearly. Right now the tenant count in your stats row sits above an Available Properties section with nothing in it yet, so the two don’t quite match. Fill that section with a few real listings before leaning on the tenant number.

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Owning every pixel instead of reusing shared templates is a strong reason to try it. The headline says “Apple Connect”, but developers know the tool as App Store Connect, which the rest of your page already uses. Use the real name so people searching for it recognize it instantly.

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@harishhere Then it was likely on our end, caught mid-load. Glad it’s fine. The “What you get” section does the job either way.

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@farilyaz The design is sharp and calm. The roast: nothing up top says what nap actually is, so people have to guess from “Your Agents. All Together.” Add one plain line under it, like “one app for working with Codex, Claude Code and Cursor.”