Brynna Tressler

[Brynna Tressler @btress13]

Over the course of this class I have learned everything that must go into design to create successful content!#engl318mu

[Brynna Tressler @btress13]

While creating my presentation I have used all of the concepts when addressing content. It definitely inproved my work! #engl318mu

[Brynna Tressler @btress13]

@Benjami05842344 Inserting a gif into your file should accomplish this. Very effective way to present the data while adding interest! #engl318mu

[Brynna Tressler @btress13]

@asmacck I think that grouping your data by a few different variables would be more effective than trying to list it by the dates #engl318mu

[Brynna Tressler @btress13]

@36keyz I think that the images are very useful! My only suggestion would be to create a clear separation between the image and text. Some text gets a little close to the image and becomes hard to read #engl318mu

[Brynna Tressler @btress13]

@Galong93230677 I think you have great hierarchy with your cover! It was a good choice to make the contents large and command attention. Good use of color! #engl318mu

[Brynna Tressler @btress13]

@TessaIacono1 I love your choice of a large graphic to create a title page! I agree that it is a little crowded... Maybe consider creating an intro of 3 or 4 sentences max for the reader to get a general idea #engl318mu

[Brynna Tressler @btress13]

@JohnLutz99 I think it is a good start but I would condense it to one sentence if you can. Also make sure it is at the beginning of your info with a clear separation between the title/intro and your info #engl318mu

[Brynna Tressler @btress13]

@Galong93230677 I think you have a great use of hierarchy here to separate your information with both size and color. My only suggestion is to shorten some of the info because it can be a lot to take in #engl318mu

[Brynna Tressler @btress13]

@english_mbryce I think if you wanted to take this a step further as far as design goes you could create more of a poster with it. Maybe consider grouping each section by color and create the information in a larger layout. #engl318mu

[Brynna Tressler @btress13]

@KTN_TWIN I agree! I work better if I have a more structured rubric or examples to work from! #engl318mu

[Brynna Tressler @btress13]

@AlexGlennRhea Couldn't agree more! Without creating structure first I find that I repeat myself throughout the paper #engl318mu

[Brynna Tressler @btress13]

@brianappleby5 #engl318mu

[Brynna Tressler @btress13]

@brianappleby5 I find that when I create an outline first my final paper has a better flow!

[Brynna Tressler @btress13]

@AndrewBechtel This is a great approach and it is also how I went about the project #engl318mu

[Brynna Tressler @btress13]

I am continuing to expand my knowledge of LOHF through my analysis and data collection #engl318mu

[Brynna Tressler @btress13]

The element of my writing practice that I would like to improve upon the most is my ability to create a paper that flows smoothly through all of the subject matter #engl318mu

[Brynna Tressler @btress13]

In order to write in multiple styles I find it is most helpful to open myself up to the largest range of others work possible #engl318mu

[Brynna Tressler @btress13]

To write for a larger project I typically begin with an overall outline with bullet points of what I want to cover within the project #engl318mu

[Brynna Tressler @btress13]

My plan for the LOHF draft is to organize my data and create an outline before starting to create an analysis #engl318mu