@MickeySantana11 your passion for the community is evident in your tone. You did a great job of capturing the people of the community and using their voices to emphasize the need for more awareness.
@OliviaDMTP your presentation was very visually effective. Great work with the coding and info graphics. I also appreciate that your ask is multifaceted and covers the bases.
@SamantEmma I appreciate that you recognized where your research leaves off so that your organization of focus can move forward with it. Proposing yourself as a ‘student’ rather than an expert leaves room for even more education on the topic!
@mt33881 great choice of organization and proposed partnership. I think this is something that the NYU organization should actually consider! Your video editing is also very mindful and thoughtful. The candid scenes against the interviews worked beautifully.
@OG_Iancarlton excellent presentation! Your introduction was solid and grabbing, your research was thorough (especially finding an exact office space) and the transitions from personal thought to your actual ask were seamless.
@JocelyneEnriqu3 (both in the presentation and throughout this entire project) you've done a great job of highlighting overlooked details of the immigrant community, specifically about their economy.
@LoWong16 pulling up the details for the upcoming budget was smart and ahead of the game. You did your research, knew your facts and demonstrated that.
@VrindaAnand3 the transition from outside to inside perception within your video was affective and moving. Great balance of voices, stats and history to prove your point!
@YongdanX your introduction was clear and concise while also being personal and grabbing. You present well and your confidence demonstrates your knowledge on the predatory.
@rwu_ny your video was vivid and affective through both your filming decisions and the details you chose to film. I’d love to watch the full length piece!
While it seems exploitive for us to contribute to this social factory, I think there’s also potential to change narratives and refine collective memory and history. (2/2) @mccDMTP
Very informative presentation and visual by @LoWong16. Your mention of the collective mind triggered me to consider how our free labor on the internet also molds collective memory. (1/2)