Founder @TheGrowthPMM. Previously product cum growth marketing @FiMoney, @Practo, @redBus, @Raymond. Building AI tool in public. Wall muralist. Dancer. Singer
Most founder messaging isn't wrong. It's not memorable.
Your one-liner is probably true. So is your competitor's.
That's the problem.
I ran a workshop on fixing it for 25+ founders and operators. Here's the exercise ๐งต
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Most founder messaging isn't wrong. It's not memorable.
Your one-liner is probably true. So is your competitor's.
That's the problem.
I ran a workshop on fixing it for 25+ founders and operators. Here's the exercise ๐งต
Step 5: Read it to a customer and ask:
"Is this how you'd describe the problem we solve?"
Their answer beats another round of internal positioning debates.
@OliverBugar@theofinr Other chore apps sell lists, but you sell proof of who did what.
I'd suggest moving your footer line up as the hero, i.e. Assign chores. Keep score. Stop the argument.
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@grasutton@theofinr IMO your best line is in the subhead, customers never see your number.
If I were to rewrite your hero, I'd say
Stop handing customers your personal number.
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@thiruk2014@theofinr Every AI resume builder tailors for JD, but you're the only one that refuses to invent experience, and that's currently hidden in your subhead.
If I were to rewrite your hero I would say,
The AI resume builder that refuses to lie for you.
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@shawntschwartz@theofinr Screener on the gmail address people already have is your MOAT.
If I were to rewrite your hero, it would be >
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@Joi2James Folks dropping links, if your homepage needs another line to make sense, that's your growth bottleneck.
Happy to help refine your narrative.
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One turns two next month.
The other was founders who've built a great product and a market that still doesn't get it.
After 12+ years in growth and PMM at Fi, Practo and redBus, I'm fixing that full-time.
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