SQUID GAME x Indian 1001 nights
The sands have secrets. When an ancient magical city rises in the desert, strangers are chosen to compete in a night of horrifying challenges. Winning means saving the world from an angry deity, but losing the one you love.
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When a Chinese princess is dragged by her own reflection into a mirror world, she must learn how to seal it shut.
If she fails, the reflections will emerge, attack, & destroy the world.
The problem?
She's fallen in love...& he's on the wrong side of the mirror.
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MEXICAN GOTHIC X BURN OUR BODIES DOWN
When 18YO Rashel inherits her estranged aunt's property, she aims to sell it to pay for her mom's medical bills.
But the house doesn't want to be sold, and Rashel will be unprepared for what the property has in store.
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Native American ONE OF US IS LYING x SADIE
When another girl is murdered on the Blackfeet Reservation, Mara and her friends doubt the Tribal Police will solve it. If they don’t investigate it themselves, they’ll be the only suspects—or worse—the next victims.
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this is such a good question! my view toward this is that every chapter (and especially those last few lines) should build up the tension: a hint of unrest, an unanswered question, a reason you HAVE to keep reading! #askmentor
Complete sentences are overrated. 😘 Sounds silly, but play around with phrasing and fragments!
EX:
I see my mom is scowling. This is not good.
vs
Mom's scowling. Not good.
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Specificity, but not TOO specific. “MC wants to save grandpa bc he’s her only family” yes! “MC has a part time job at Super Secret Proper Noun School That Only Gets Mentioned in Chaoter Four” no. #AskMentor
@explorergrace I feel this. I also would like to Nano! But I guess we'll have to see when the time comes around! (Life tends to surprise me/get in the way of my plans lol!)
And here is a thread I wrote about the Major Dramatic Question, which maybe is what I should have started with here because it's the First Thing and incredibly important to stay focused on: https://t.co/Xs23ypJoQa