@imaginemagic209 I felt as though the reality of this video was the mask we all have, believing things that are false, or not believing in the truth. I loved how the things being spoken felt incoherent, and let it reflect the mixed emotions and thoughts we all may have. #thirdvoiceparty
@imaginemagic209 JUMPSCARE: When the mannequins became faces, I audibly gasped. You did a great job allowing the echoing voice and media elements to contradict yet interact with one another. #thirdvoiceparty
@jstofalltrades The mixture of elements, such as blank screens, the interactive maze, and other forms of media, came together to show maybe a reality or optimism. I felt there was also a tension with not really hearing your voice super clearly. #thirdvoiceparty
@jstofalltrades I liked how the whispers, birds chirping, and background noise transitioned to the background color fading into white. It felt a bit more reliant on each other for an intro. But you can see the intentional voices coming together with what's presented on screen. #thirdvoiceparty
@Spontaneanna There seems to be less structure and rhythm to this final video, compared to your SME No. 4 we watched together! I thought that did justice to your video and the third voice, which to me is the unknown. It felt much more tense. I felt it very clearly around 2:11. #thirdvoiceparty
@Spontaneanna I really liked your changes you made to the introduction of the video. The continuous loop of the doors with the silence felt eerie and really transitioned well. #thirdvoiceparty
@blackdiamond_su I felt as though your use of silence and text on screen towards the end of the video was a nice touch. It was interesting to see the route you took in comparison to my video. Nice job! #thirdvoiceparty
@blackdiamond_su idk what "skink in me" means, LOL, but I liked the tension created with the background music. I felt that it did juxtapose the introductory clips, first shown, as you verbally stated the positive experience with Totoro. #thirdvoiceparty
@blackdiamond_su I liked the repetitive clips of mismatched shoes and thrown shoes around it, accompanied by the words, "things were seamless." It felt like a final punch #thirdvoiceparty
I want to ensure I am fully immersed, not pressuring myself to be super calculated, but rather being focused and putting my attention into where my heart leads me. #hwa7#listening
My current draft reflects that I have shifted too far left to avoid being so far right. As a structured person, I have attempted to break that level of predictability, but now it has given my video a lack of arc and journey. #hwa7#listening
The third voice is a perspective that is not linear and takes the back seat. I do not observe from my perspective but rather through an unbiased or maybe biased lens. #hwa7#thirdvoice
Patty utilized thrift stores as a great way to find materials and mixed media, but also as an outlet to brainstorm. She mentioned she used only about a couple of hundred bucks for props and used whatever she had or what those around her had. #hwa7#budgetconstraints
I also think it shows us that, from an outside perspective, things may appear random as we question their meaning or intent. #hwa7#propsarenotjustprops
I loved the little Burger plastic toy from BK. I know it was present on screen frequently, but knowing the special meaning of it being their childhood toy help a lot of importance as a viewer. #hwa7#propsarenotjustprops
@WhatAJ_4 If there is a tough time with the words and removing any, there can also be a utilzation of on screen text to supplement the visuals. #smeno4peerreview