@Adi_n1829#videoparty that’s really unique to her, and i’m obsessed with how calming but entertaining her videos are. so that’s really the vibe i was going for! no lesson really, but i think u could prob find a way to interpret it into one
@Adi_n1829#videoparty to be honest when i first envisioned the project, i wanted it to feel like a cozifoodwithemi video. you know the girl on tiktok who does baking but her videos are very aesthetically pleasing and have a good amount of asmr? she has really distinct background music
@MeganT209#videoparty my favorite part was when you started wrapping the toilet paper around you like a scarf. also very patty coded but it ties in with the randomness of the video
@MeganT209#videoparty you combined one of my most favorite subjects and one i despise: fashion and orgo (respectively). love how you used one in order to make the other more engaging
@spswag25#videoparty i'm glad to watch this again after watching the STMP. you did a great job including the ending clip and audio, which really ties in the white narrative on the colonization of india
@evan_eyl33 @rohanp_11 #videoparty while the two topics might not seem to have much in common, you guys are able to connect them through game's purpose of building for protection and violence in order to win. great job!!
@evan_eyl33 @rohanp_11 #videoparty i think the glitches are a really good addition that brings together the entire video. it acts as a distraction from the audio but also serves as a transition to the end of the video
@realvitaminlee#videoparty that being said, you do a really good job of presenting r/Reality with the news channel audios. everyone has a different take on events and it effects the way news is shared
@realvitaminlee#videoparty i'm inspired by how you chose your topic. i was only vaguely aware of what was going on in myanmar, and i'm ashamed to say that i haven't done the research that i should have
@ADFLegal#videoparty i love the contrasts of your project. it really embodies the two different realities, and personally what i feel when im watching things online while doing my daily activities.
@spswag25 i don't know if i wanna actually define burnout in the video just yet. i got the suggestion not to before and i was trying to gauge whether or not it fit the vibe, because everyone has their own version of burnout yk
@DANNYLIN47665 i was thinking about that! i just need to find the right audio and figure out how to include it without overtaking some of the original clip audios i left in there
@Howard_Luo_209#peerreview3 i think that this is pretty good so far. really focus on the clips ur using and how you want to end your video. The flow is pretty good and matches really well with the narration. you're doing great!
@Howard_Luo_209#peerreview3 i think it does a really good job of constructing reality through the use of chess and commentary, reminding the viewer that there are several forms of graduation, not just the formal ones such as college graduation
@Howard_Luo_209#peerreview3 the third theme emerges through the clips of crash outs and then excitements, not giving up in order to get to that final end goal