@cbcreative@samuelburr Carefully, she scooped the glass shards into a bowl she fashioned with her uninjured hand, and then into the bin under the sink. She layered some extra kitchen roll over the evidence for good measure. She was practiced at hiding broken things. #WriteCBC
@secretattic_ Sorry to hear that. I submitted a flash story at the end of January to Fictionette, is there anywhere I can see if it was selected or not?
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@cbcreative @JonnyGeller The thickness of it - that was the other detail that stood out to her. When you see blood on television it has a wateriness to it. This was more viscous; reminiscent of an egg yolk but braggier. Sheβd bled before. From inside and out. This was far more impressive. #WriteCBC
@cbcreative@StephT2000 It was unbearably hot despite the blizzard. Shaking, she shrugged off the coat sheβd appropriated, dropping it by her bare feet. There had been no time for shoes. The sound of barking dogs carried through the trees, slicing through her blurry head. They had found her. #WriteCBC