@aschapmann Your headline stacks two claims ("AI tools" + "Reddit") visitors have to parse the mechanism before they even reach your CTA, that's where you lose people. Also: 7.8%โ4.6% while scaling could be traffic-mix, not just the page. Free roast: https://t.co/i5Q079wtYy
Most 'is my landing page good' feedback is someone being nice to you. Roastly isn't. Paste your URL, get 3 specific things wrong pinned to exact spots on a screenshot. Free. https://t.co/i5Q079wtYy
@kushmergedeck Roastly: paste your URL, get a real screenshot with the problems circled in red pen not a checklist score, an actual look at your page. Free, no signup.
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@marclou Currently in Turkey visiting my wife's family and I agree it is a very magical place. The history of this country and it's amazing people makes it very special. I am glad you enjoyed it as much as I do and got off the beaten path a bit.
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Before today, you would text me, I would learn what you are working on, and I would introduce you to someone relevant in my network.
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@kushmergedeck Lets connect! I am working on -
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I looked at 4 landing pages yesterday that founders posted asking for feedback.
4 different ways they lose a visitor in the first 5 seconds:
1. The small label above the headline explained the product better than the headline did. Swap them.
2. A subhead meant to say "no limits" read like "we don't track usage." If a line needs a second read, rewrite it.
3. A scroll animation left long stretches of blank screen between sections. Empty space mid-scroll reads as broken, not dramatic.
4. The only testimonial came from someone with no connection to the buyer. An irrelevant quote hurts more than no quote.
Which one is on your page right now?
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