Steve Gian

SaaS Copywriter | Business Consultant
3+ years experience. Sharp, direct copy.

Handcrafted Landing Pages, Email sequences.
No AI, No templates.

[Steve Gian @stevegiancopy]

This is a landing page for Rimberio, a platform that helps SaaS teams move faster without needing a dozen tools.

The goal isn’t to list features, but to show how messy operations cost precious time and why clarity is the real fix.

Full analysis in the comment section:

[Steve Gian @stevegiancopy]

@romanbuildsaas If he's so irrelevant then why are you trying to buying him so hard and got triggered when you got rejected?!

Holy, there are crazy people out there Son...

[Steve Gian @stevegiancopy]

@andi_losing Exactly that😂

[Steve Gian @stevegiancopy]

It looks cool, but I have to agree with what others said The animations are killing conversions.

Up next, even though you have social proof, the first thing people see is your name in the largest font.

What problem are you solving for your clients? How is your app different from others?

You need a clear value proposition. It should take less than 3 seconds for potential clients to understand what you’re all about.

Hope this helps.

[Steve Gian @stevegiancopy]

@Tobby_scraper The whole point of replying is to build connections and talk to real human beings no?

AI is a great tool but it's not going to replace human interaction any time soon.

[Steve Gian @stevegiancopy]

@olivercookson Happy 2026, it was a good year overall.

[Steve Gian @stevegiancopy]

@FounderKyle Is it a personal issue or business decision? You can always pull back on the hours you put in if you need a break.

[Steve Gian @stevegiancopy]

@SaidAitmbarek So, billions invested in marketing every year is.. pointless? 😅

Said no one ever..

[Steve Gian @stevegiancopy]

@SpencePatterson ..and years of consistency if I may add. You don't become a millionaire overnight.

[Steve Gian @stevegiancopy]

@pmitu Tiny bit of celebration followed by mountains of work 😁

[Steve Gian @stevegiancopy]

@thequeenofmm Not really. Not even remotely close but to each his own I guess.

[Steve Gian @stevegiancopy]

@andi_losing You can play around with it. I assume the audience you’re targeting already understands the language at a basic level, but if you want to simplify it further, you can.

[Steve Gian @stevegiancopy]

@mhp_guy That is true. Focusing on selling too many features or benefits, instead of leading with one core feature often backfires.

[Steve Gian @stevegiancopy]

Full Audit Website Analysis:

A couple simple changes that will drastically improve the home page:

Headline:

Always know what’s next for your SaaS

Subline:

“What do I build now?” should never happen.

-Validate first. Build second.
-Always know what’s next, step by step.
-Fewer tools. Easier launch.

Testimonial section(Proof) Two CTAs:

Primary CTA: Get on the waitlist | Secondary CTA: See all the features

Why we simplified the homepage

1. The original page was doing too much, too soon
When a visitor landed on the page, they were immediately exposed to:

Multiple features, Multiple concepts, Multiple promises
This made it hard to answer the most important question:

“What does this product actually help me do?”
More information, especially at the start, creates friction and hesitation.

2. The homepage now has one clear job

We redesigned the homepage so it does one thing well:

Make it immediately clear what problem SaaS Console solves, then let the user decide what to do next.
Instead of explaining everything, the page now focuses on: 1)The core pain 2)The core outcome 3)A clear next action

3. Clear focus on the outcome, not the features

Features like validation frameworks or legal documents are important, but listing them early distracted from the main value. So we shifted the copy to focus on what changes for the founder:

-Less guessing
-Clear next steps
-Fewer tools to manage

This makes the product easier to understand in seconds, which is what we aim for.

4. Different users, different levels of awareness

Not all users want the same level of detail.
So we introduced two clear paths:

Get on the waitlist → for users who already understand the value
See all the features → for users who want to know more details
This respects user intent instead of forcing everyone through the same flow.

5. Why features were intentionally removed from the homepage

In general, The homepage should be as simple as possible. It is not the right place to explain how everything works.

It should be structure as:

-What do you do
-Who do you do it for
-What do users do next

Detailed feature explanations work better on a dedicated page, after the user already understands why the product exists.

Result
The homepage is now:

Easier to scan
Faster to understand
Less overwhelming
More conversion-focused

And most importantly:
A founder can now understand what SaaS Console does in a few seconds.

That certainly took a while to finish, I promise it looked better on PDF😁

Hope this helps

[Steve Gian @stevegiancopy]

Absolutely. Here's one idea you can do it:

Headline :
30 seconds to your website score and dofollow backlink

Bullet points (Replacing subline):

-Analyze your website
-Fix the real bottlenecks
-Prove it with a certified badge

If you don't like bullet points, you can do numbered list(1,2,3) works just as well.

Let me know what you think.

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@TimoBuilds_ I don't believe there's a business owner out there who wasn't at one point focusing on the wrong things.

The only thing you can't get back after all, is time.

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@wizofecom Bookmarked this, it's really that good.

[Steve Gian @stevegiancopy]

It's clean overall but here's two actionable steps to improve it:

1)The headline is ok, but the subline is too long and doing too much work.

2)Rewrite both like so:
Headline: "Why travel alone? Find your match today"
Subline:"Connect before you travel, skip the awkward meetups."

3)Ditch the animation on the headline. Especially on mobile, this thing can be a nightmare and hard to read.

Hope this helps

[Steve Gian @stevegiancopy]

@mdnlabs I've got a full audit of your page if you want to see it. I can send it over anytime😆

[Steve Gian @stevegiancopy]

Hey Andi, how are you doing?

I took a look at your website and it looks like you have a solid foundation going.

Social proof, features, and free analysis CTA works well.
The only thing I would fix is the headline. It needs to instantly communicate value to the visitors and you can increase conversions by fixing this alone.

Any other abstract language fix is a bonus, because the headline is what keeps or drives people away.

Hope this helps.