Thank you @NFparkrun for a fantastic start to Christmas day. The party bags for the children were brilliant - they loved them. Merry Christmas and see you in the new year.
‘With regret, I must resign’ has a lovely lyrical quality but lose last bit of sentence. Good use of 2 paragraphs but the work streams sentence lets you down. Avoid corporate jargon. ‘Because of the erosion in these’ is maladroit. You can do much better. 15/20