@kylerxu2023 I agree with this. if the story were in the city then the murders would be far less jarring to the people in the community #writingabouttexts
the way that Locke describes all that she does is very in depth and makes the reader feel like they are in the same place as the characters #writingabouttexts
@rightwrite25 I feel like it happens that way because of a moment of vulnerability but not in a taking advantage way. It's more like emotions are so high that it happens. #writtingabouttexts
@rightwrite25 This is something that I have kind of struggled with because at times it feels too wordy almost. I do think that as the novel progresses that the story will take over and be really captivating #writingabouttexts
@morganh2024 So far it has definitely been a little slow but I am excited to see what's coming with the three of them because there has to be a twist to make it a good story #writingabouttexts
I am excited to read this novel because it won't just be straight romance. I think that them being spies will add a lot to the story. #writingabouttexts
@IbeG6502 i think that overall Rufus was a bad guy overall but there were times and parts of him that tried to be better but with him the bad outweighed the good. #writingabouttexts