@muaddibstyle@occamschainsaaw Would be better, not to say it’s great, I’m not a great writer but I’m also not talking about a simple metaphor like that
@muaddibstyle@occamschainsaaw letting it work for itself. I think like “
His voice was a centipede, creeping its way into your ear unnoticed, wriggling around the inside of your skull and crawling into the folds of your brain hardly noticed, but your discomfort slowly builds until it is too much to bear.”(3/4
@rinnybunz@sweetsangria0 It also just doesn’t conjure the image of a centipede lmao, all it makes me think is that the author’s an idiot who thinks six is a lot of limbs
@s4m31p4n@JamesNotJamie1 It can’t actually they’re smoked in entirely different ways, you can’t smoke crack out of a meth pipe cause it needs to come in direct contact with the flame and you can’t smoke meth from a crack pipe cause it needs to be vaporized