Really happy with the responses from a beta reader (daughters friend) and alpha reader (established author).
Done all I can for now. Time to query!!
#amquerying#WritingCommmunity
Seems everyone I know got a UK Govt Emergency Alert in Cornwall for the red weather warning…..
Except me and everyone else I know using @EE@EE what happened?
#emergencyalert
(Screen shot sent across by a colleague.)
Meanings of “sorry, are you in the queue?”
1. This shop has a terrible layout, making it impossible to tell who’s in the queue.
2. I know you’re not in the queue but you’re standing in an odd place and causing everyone tension. I want you to realise this and move away from the queue.
3. I know you’re in the queue, it’s just that you’ve decided to not move forward enough, leaving a large gap, and I don’t like it at all.
4. I just accidentally pushed in and I want to show you that I honestly didn’t mean it. I am respectful of the queue, please believe me.
5. I’m flabbergasted that the queue is so ridiculously long and I’d like it known.
@LydiaRSilver Ooo…I’ve got an action/adventure:
14yr old Alex studies at a top secret Time Academy. When the timeline suddenly changes, Alex must defeat a sinister empress or his world will be lost
You saw an earlier draft 12mths+ ago, would you be happy to consider a revised query please?