Your hero has 6 jobs. Most pages do 2 of them.
The headline sells the outcome, not the tool.
One CTA, one visual of the result, and proof right where doubt peaks.
A badge or who-it's-for line tells the right visitor they're in the right place.
Which of the 6 is missing from your hero? Reply and I'll tell you what I'd fix first.
@Kl3jvi 165 users in 20 days with no paid tier is a strong start. On your homepage the main button says "Start a runner" and the plan section says "Start free. Scale when your team does." Next step: put that free line right beside the button?
@Ankur_Sehrawatt 250+ people using it is a solid milestone. On your homepage the H1 reads "Your Mac, perfectly arranged." and a section lower down says "Pay once. Keep it."
@kkteja "Practise your next interview out loud" is a clear hook. On your homepage the H1 says "Level up for your next interview." and the main button says "Insert coin". Which should a first-time visitor see on that button: A) "Insert coin" or B) "Start your free interview"?
"Everything looks right, but the application still behaves in a way you can't explain" is a painfully real line. On your homepage the pricing buttons read "Choose Starter" and "Choose Pro". Next step: add one low-commitment first button above the plans for people who are not ready to pick yet?
@dimeji_dev "Tell it any topic and it builds a course" is an easy line to picture. On your homepage the main button says "Start learning free" and the second says "Watch it in 30 seconds". Which should a first-time visitor see first: A) Start learning free or B) Watch it in 30 seconds?
@gregvideos Applying to YC with a tool already running three of your own companies is a strong line. On your homepage the H1 reads "AI can do everything. At your company, it proves it, job by job." and a section further down says "I run it on my own companies".
@lachlanbuilds "Web search for AI agents is way overpriced" is a sharp opener. On your homepage the H1 says "Cast one line. Catch the whole web for a tenth of a cent." Which should a first-time visitor see first: A) "$1 per 1,000 searches" or B) "a tenth of a cent"?
@izz_arush Good question on company logos. On your homepage the first screen has "Try it free" and the $59 lifetime price shows up lower down. Next step: add a one-line "first video free, then $59 once" right beside that button?
@PixelsByNikki "Mac Screen Dimmer for Multiple Monitors" is a clear promise. On your homepage the H1 reads "Dim every display. Rest your eyes." Which should a first-time visitor see first: A) that eye-comfort line or B) "multiple monitors" in the H1?
@s4ch Your "same flight on points often costs a fraction" line is strong. On your homepage the main button says "Add to Chrome" and the second says "See how it works". Which should a first-time visitor see first: A) Add to Chrome or B) See how it works?
@FinWoodsDev@Joi2James Quick read of https://t.co/qc9n52oZaI: the H1 is "Brim — Your agents and your tools, in the notch." and the page says $4.99 once. A/B: keep the agents/tools H1, or lead the first screen with the $4.99-once offer?
@no1guangming@Joi2James Quick read of https://t.co/UEbvfyr3sq: H1 "Buy, sell, hire, rent — without putting your email in the ad." Sharp privacy angle, with "Post a free ad" and "Browse ads near you" as CTAs. Would you A/B two equal buttons against leading with only "Post a free ad"?
@tuffpm@Joi2James Quick read of https://t.co/diiGTxFMtN: the H1 is "Tasks, docs and chat. One price for the whole team" and the FAQ asks "Is it really not priced per seat?" Visitors doubt the claim, so a next step: show the lowest plan price right under the H1 as proof. Worth a try?
@harshv2001@Joi2James Quick read of https://t.co/V0vCi2Hikn: H1 "Decision frameworks for leaders who answer to a board, not a hunch." Very specific buyer. Next step: put the "Answer one question" entry point right under the H1 as the main button.
@imrabin11@Joi2James Quick read of https://t.co/tgUmHQGtrg: H1 "Experience Nepal, Directly from Local Experts." The meta mentions an AI trip planner, permits, costs and seasons, but the H1 mentions none of it. Observation only.
@InPareeksha@Joi2James Quick read of https://t.co/WzPhzZeRrT: the H1 is "Learn it. Practise it. Be ready for it." while an H2 says "Every test unlocked. One year. ₹99." The ₹99 line is the sharper hook. A/B: lead with the ₹99 line, or keep the learn/practise/ready H1?
@pawelsb@Joi2James Quick read of https://t.co/0uN42ET67W: H1 "Your Mac. One shortcut ahead." with "Download free for Mac" as the CTA. Short and clean. Would you A/B it against a line saying what the shortcut does, like "Apps, notes and clipboard from one command bar"?
@thetechychef@Joi2James Quick read of https://t.co/nDkLPIxSBA: the H1 is "The operating workspace for social media teams" and the pricing text lists $50 to $198 tiers. The H1 names its reader clearly, which many first screens skip. A solid base to build the hero on.
@Maroc3T@Joi2James Quick read of https://t.co/a30o6UTNBI: H1 "Slides where the maths moves." Concrete and memorable. Next step: make sure "Start free" is the one primary button beside it, with "Watch the 3-minute tour" as the quiet secondary.
@hakimuddinkika@imryanarya007 Quick read of https://t.co/NGSxqMA8zr: the H1 is "Launch once. Backlink forever." and the buttons are "Launch Now" and "Visit". One clear sentence of promise, and the $5 entry price shows up in the page text. A simple, honest first impression for a launch directory.